Cepaeus

Amazing work! I really admire how much care you’ve put into staying true to Tolkien’s canon. This is such a strong start and I can’t wait to see where it goes. Please don’t drop it! I’d absolutely recommend this to any LOTR fan.

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Great story! Definitely a must-read for anyone who enjoys novels without “truck-kuns” or overly system-driven plots. Here the protagonist earns his strength through his own efforts and the growth is refreshingly fast without the usual endless suffering for minimal progress. On the downside, author tends to describe the thoughts and reflections of almost every character in excessive detail which sometimes feels unnecessary. To the author: I truly hope for faster chapter releases! I’d also love to see more development of the MC himself. So far, he tends to view everyone around him only as enemies, NPCs, or resources to exploit. I believe the story would become even stronger if, over time, he grows less selfish and more emotionally connected, at least to those closest to him. After all, it’s hard to stay invested in a hero who shows no positive feelings at all.

Sorry, I just got back home from a long trip (flights, layovers…). So last night I accidentally posted the wrong chapter

The main lemons will come after chapter 90. At first, I thought starting the story with lemon content was unnecessary, but seeing the interest, I wrote one for Patreon — with images included.

The Tsunade lemon from the previous chapter has long been available on my Patreon 😉

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