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In some moments it became normal, but still in chapter 4 the conversation between the main character and that girl is too similar to AI (although maybe this is because I am reading from a translator)
It seems to me or the AI wrote the dialogues, they look like they were written by the cheapest AI program. The idea is good, but the dialogues need some work.
I just liked that in some moments the plot goes in a different direction and that's all.
Inuyasha Arc 493-642
The Ayanokouji arc is so gross, thank god it's short 437-489
Super Shenron? Are you serious? This is the top divine summoning beast or whatever, and Shenron doesn't really fit here, in my opinion.
人在斗罗,武魂是mega裂空座
I found the original and it's complete nonsense. Shanks, why the hell would he save Teach? Why the hell? I don't know, he just showed up and started fighting to save Teach.
If Teach somehow survives this battle, it will be complete nonsense.
Perhaps you misunderstood something, since I am writing these comments through a translator, because I don’t know English, but if you want to understand, then I wrote Kaido only learned his half-beast mode when he was 40.