Arjun_Verma_7924

seems the best skill to me

joking the beginning was nice but it turns out to be rather shitty

an interesting novel especially considering that this is the authors first novel. Not bad at all.

taking stock of this trips gain, what a unique line.

getting a slave doesn't really seem nice

I don't know I it's me or I have read this exact line about 10 times.

The novel's pretty great till now. But you haven't really defined the Mc properly. Like I am still confused about his looks and personality, other than that it is a very nice novel for me. It has a really nice writing style and plot till now. Reminds me of the reinacarnation of the strongest sword god. But the writing style of this is better according to me. Hope you continue to do the same or even better.

man this novel is a lot better than I expected.

man reading this I wish our world too had such vr games and I was able to do something like this.

such a fancy name