ThexAnomally

Thank you for the feedback!

Okay that’s fair. I’ll strive to do better with my writing and mc character development. I appreciate the feedback.

Damn lol , I get where you’re coming from. You’ll have to wait and see for sure

Lmaoo i appreciate the feedback for the future

It’s not his actual name lol I was showing what he is

They wasn’t going to use enough force to pull something that big but something went wrong resulting in more power usage, causing bigger objects to come. Of course there’s always a risk of alien’s and their tech and they knew that. Hope this helped a little

I appreciate the honest feedback and will continue with the world building. I will definitely keep cooking!

Concept of the truck that isekai’s people is apart of a organisation is very interesting and the world building is solid along with the characters! Leaves you wanting to know more about the energy source and the background of characters especially the Manager.

So many interesting twists! Chapters are definitely cooking for sure. Excited to see just how ‘Analyse’ will grow.

Thank you for the kind words , i greatly appreciate it. I’ll definitely work hard at correcting all the grammatical errors in the future.