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Wasn't Harrison supposed to already be in jail?
How many times are you going to tell Hazel how she met Damien.
Guess it's not Julian's sister who's in jail but his mother in jail??? Wtf man
Isn't Mr. Vance supposed to be Hazel's general manager???
These chapters are all in mixed up order. But the names being incorrect are still ridiculous.
When the heck did Damien and Hazel get engaged??? Wtf. This story is so messed up with so many inconsistencies and missing plots. Ffs.
This book is never ending of constant repeats....
And again the amount of times Damien had told of Hazel's drunkenness....jeez.
I seriously want to finish this. but the inconsistencies is ridiculous. and the fact that you refuse to read your work before starting on the next chapter is also ridiculous. The amount of times you've introduced Chloe and changed the relationship with ivy and Gabrielle is ridiculous. I just want to read a consistent story with no missing plots! it's not that difficult to read your work before updating!
now the sister is back to being dead lol goodness lmao pathetic