Ryo78

What exactly is the idea?

What would I even gain from that? I can improve my story by myself. No one can truly develop it for me unless there’s an actual benefit for me in return. Other than that, I honestly don’t want to talk to anyone. Also, my novel is still in its early stages, so what exactly convinced you that it would be good?

I am currently revising the chapters and writing the second part of the novel. If you are interested in reading the revised version, you can wait for one day, or simply let me know.

I’m sorry, but the novel is currently undergoing some major revisions, so it may seem very bad right now and not worth reading. I will also be deleting most of the chapters to improve the story and reduce the rushed pacing. Thank you for reading and supporting the novel. I will fix it for you

the Best novel❤️I love the story,​Keep up the good work

I know it’s translated into English. In the end, my original language is Arabic, and I don’t really know English that well. My story was originally written in Arabic, but I wanted to share it on another platform. Many people recommended Webnovel to me, so I posted it here. I was going to publish it in Arabic, but I was told that this is an international site and most readers here don’t speak Arabic, so I translated it into English. I’m still learning English, and I haven’t even turned 16 yet, so I’m doing my best. If it’s bad or you didn’t like it, I’m sorry — I will try to make it better as much as I can. Sorry also for the late reply. And honestly, if I wrote it in Arabic, which is my native language, who in this international community would be able to read it? Do you know Arabic?

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Thank you😭❤️❤️❤️

thank you😭❤️

good chapter