Big_Ben_4857

Yeah im not feeling this chapter at all. And theres one reason for it: Principality Observation... was completely and utterly ignored. This singularity is strapped to the eyeballs with deeply devoted christians, and Fujimaru summoned an Angel and they not only ignored it, they never even aknowledged it was there to begin with which is DEEPLY out of character, especially for Jalter who thinks herself as Gods Wrath in the singularity. So for her to be completely apathetic to something THAT holy is very insencere on your part. I also dont like that Fujimaru is holding back so much that he doesnt even flinch when his whole squad is being wiped. You'd think a deeply obsessive collector would do all he can to preserve his collection but nah, he's just sitting there all pretty and smiles. If he's even half as strong as Ainz, which if he's a guild member means he's probably close or equal in level, then he should have eviscerated all his enemies with just his aura alone.

This is EASILY one of the best Danmachi fanfics I have seen in a while. Its original, its well written, the pacing is good (a bit slow for me but thats just personal nitpicking) and its not a translated work nor AI assisted/generated. This peak shit is original start to finish and that makes it great by default.

So youre just gonna ignore the reviews that call out your TOS violating thievery of novel translations and just continue to spam new ones everytime I or someone else call you out? This is the 4th time I have to chastize you and the 2nd time you decided to abandon your previous stolen story to jump to a new one. Have some shame.

This fic started out fine and well, and it kept true Shirou's character. Then the Wargame vs Freya happened. At that point, Shirou started to talk and behave like a poorly written self insert of a chinese novel. He refers to reality like its a game, constantly throws joking references around and just ??? Acts like nothing is real. Idk wtf is happening with this fic but I am not a fan of it. Not at all.

Yet another chinese translated slop story. For this one, the original author has made explicit remarks NOT to translate or repost their work without consent, which I am ready to bet an organ that you do not have. How are you still allowed on webnovel?

Yknow what? I am impressed. Somewhat, that is. This story is so ridiculously funny you can completely ignore the fact thats its a chinese novel translation that doesn't credit the original even on your patreon. But you either just got lucky or you stopped proofreading the chapters as the latest 2, as of the time of writing this review, had a SIGNIFICANT increase in grammar mistakes. Not to mention calling alfia alpia.

The story is... okay. Good writing quality, stable grammar and chapters are huge for webnovel standarts. But goddamn how many times will you repeat about Venti's nature? Up to chapter 14, EVERY CHAPTER at least once talks about Venti's concept as a god of wind. Its a constant repetition, several paragraphs you could have completely cut off with no contextual changes to the story.

Another Chinese Novel translation. But this one is bad for a whole different sleugh of reasons. Not only are you not the original author here, youre not even the original translator. You blatantly copypasted someone else's translation here without changing a single thing. Same name change, exact same dialogues, you even did the same thing the other translator did and started promoting your patreon in the middle of the chapter rather than at the end. AND every time your patreon promo appears, an entire segment of previous content is auto repeated. Chapter 50 is a perfect example of that. The chapter starts with Hestia telling Apollo off, then the patreon promo, then it cuts to a minute before their talk and you REPEAT THE TALK WORD BY WORD. Youre not proofreading this story at all. Youre just mass selecting and copypasting paragraphs without even checking their content. This one isnt AI assisted, but somehow, you succeeded in making it even worse than if it was.

You forgot to switch accounts when writing this. Thanks for providing proof that your story is review boosted.

The story could have been decent... if it were not for the abyssmal lack of consistencies. First he emphasises on secrecy, then talks to ochako about his abilities like she knows everything?? Out of nowhere, he starts mentioning multiple powers to his classmates and no one bats an eye. Matter of fact, this is the 3rd 'gacha system' MHA fic I've read on webnovel and im pretty sure all of them are either AI generated or AI assisted. Point is they have no proofread at all. It blatantly feels like you just told ChatGPT to conjure up a chapter and copy pasted without even flying over it once.