Jeff_Fraser_9153

Starts off fine with some nonsensical world issues as most. It's a decent read till chapter 231. After that, it's clear the author forgot what he was writing and didn't want to try to continue the story. From there, everything before is meaningless, and the story will not have any more alchemy or storyline of any kind. The biggest issue that the author knows less about the story is the reader. It's clear that the author barely remembers the basic storyline and can't even remember what they wrote 2 chapters before. This is evident by issues with the story, author using the wrong name for the MC, forgetting relevant numbers, forgetting the basic power structure of Alchemist, ect.