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hey heads up everybody I'm at Seattle visiting my sister. i am away from my friends laptop, as such i have not been able to write during this past week, I will have to postpone the next chapter until October. apologies for the delay.

let us finish this story

I thank you for your honest opinion, I am using AI and you will find that often in the early chapters, but my more later chapters I have been trying to use it less and less. I apologize if it broke the immersion and left you with a bad reading experience, I am still a new writer and I am trying to find my balance in writing and I am using AI as a crutch until I get a good enough footing for myself when I do not need it anymore. As for the character of Robert House, please let me know where I failed with him, I am always welcoming to criticism and suggestions, please let me know where I failed and I will attempt to improve the character hopefully later down the line, get him to become a better Robert Edwin House.

let's go

working on two other projects, as soon as I'm finished I'll try to get something out soon. I'm really sorry for the wait.

Learning from mistakes is always more fun than being told not to make a mistake. The idea I had that I hoped to detail was that many people joining the society for the first time, always pull an all nightery, they only stop after their first catastrophe. If it was something that Marcus could handle he would have helped clean it up and hopefully teach Robert a lesson about taking a step back. If the problem was too large, something that not even he could handle it would have been a big problem that would have had Marcus penalized big time. For Marcus I plan to make him more of a best lessons are learned through mistakes. Wisdom born from hardship. Where Sophia is the unquestioning, do not make this mistake, you are not permitted, it is the rules, obey your superiors they know more than you sort of mentality. Wisdom of your elders. I am experimenting with my writing, and trying to do a duality of opposed opinions on topics. A NCR vs Legion style debate, or in this case a Sofia Vs Marcus debate of how the future Institute would end up on the lesser level. Now House in question did sleep in the Labs, but he had no active experiments going on, I should have mentioned that clear that your not allowed to dose off while an experiment is running at the same time. I plan to explain this more in later chapters.

oh wait now I know why, I did some edits on the paragraph, one of my readers lets me know what mistakes I made and upon updating and saving the corrections, that resets the paragraph. let me send you the original comment that I wrote.

I saw your first comment, I responded to it. I don't know why it's getting deleted

Learning from mistakes is always more fun than being told not to make a mistake. The idea I had that I hoped to detail was that many people joining the society for the first time, always pull an all nightery, they only stop after their first catastrophe. If it was something that Marcus could handle he would have helped clean it up and hopefully teach Robert a lesson about taking a step back. If the problem was too large, something that not even he could handle it would have been a big problem that would have had Marcus penalized big time. For Marcus I plan to make him more of a best lessons are learned through mistakes. Wisdom born from hardship. Where Sophia is the unquestioning, do not make this mistake, you are not permitted, it is the rules, obey your superiors they know more than you sort of mentality. Wisdom of your elders. I plan to explain this more in later chapters.

T_T I keep making this mistake since middle school. I can feel the ghosts of all my English teachers reaching for a shoe to beat me with.