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I like Mc too😧

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Oh, Noan took some rest

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I've only read up to chapter 4, and I wanted to share my thoughts so far. Overall, it was good. Somewhere between great and good, but leaning more toward good. I liked the MC, and the battle scene was pretty well done and nicely described. But I had an issue with how the MC's power was activated — it felt way too sudden, and you could tell the author just wanted to get it out of the way quickly. Overall, if the story keeps going like this and doesn't become too fight-focused, it should be fine. I didn't really like Sherlock that much — felt a bit cliché — but acceptable overall. I'd be happy if a much better villain shows up in later chapters or arcs. All in all, it’s something that makes me want to stick around and it’s been enjoyable for me.

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