LK27

A good work, it lives up to the title and the synopsis.

Overall, it's an entertaining and easy read, ideal for passing the time. The story moves at a good pace, and the adult scenes appear naturally, without exaggeration. Although the plot isn't particularly deep or anything that makes it stand out, the author's effort to tell a pleasant story is evident. With more development of the plot and characters, his future works could be even better.

You could create a Discord channel so we can see the character images in full. Because the Webnovel page always covers most of the image.

You could create a Discord channel to view character images more easily without half the image being covered up like WebNovel does.

Given the protagonist's personality, it's hard to believe he'd ever have a romance. It would be a twisted romance. I recommend tweaking the brainwashing a bit or adding an option where he isn't brainwashed.

If I could ask the author for anything, it would be to fix the brainwashing thing, because even if you try to justify that they still retain a bit of their personality, it's more than clear that this isn't the case.

Recommended for those who enjoy dark and sadistic stories. The first few chapters are weak, but it improves considerably when the protagonist accepts his madness and becomes a cruel villain, focused solely on revenge and his own gratification, disregarding the feelings of others, morality, and everything else. The weakest point is the handling of brainwashing: although the author tries to justify that the women retain part of their personalities, it's not believable, and they end up functioning as objects at the protagonist's service. If this type of content isn't to your liking, this isn't a recommended read. My expectations for the final revenge are high, with torture and explicit violence, because the family revenge set the bar high. If it's anything less than that, the author will disappoint me.

If I could ask the author for anything, it would be to fix the brainwashing thing, because even if you try to justify that they still retain a bit of their personality, it's more than clear that this isn't the case.

I think I'd enjoy the work more if you used a wider variety of words, because every time you describe a power or feeling, you use "profound," "primitive," or at least that's how it's translated into Spanish, and a few others I can't remember, but you always repeat about four words. It gets tiresome to use them all the time, and it becomes boring to read like this. Another thing I noticed is that every time you describe something, you give a negative clarification of the description. I think you could skip that or at least not use it as much.