Kerebas03

I read 130+ chapters and I have to say, the journey is not worth it. The book starts out interesting, and I think until chapters 70-80, it is actually quite good. But the fall off is incredible. First of all, 100% use of AI by the time I reach my chapter. Maybe before it was used here and there for certain descriptions to ease the author's job, and I am OK with that. But by around chapter 135, it seems the author has just given up, and he simply makes AI write all of it. Characters from one chapter to another say completely different things, and mention events opposite to what actually happened. It's really horrible. If you are reading this review, I really advise you to not waste time with it. I am actually a big fan of the author's other work, Four of a Kind, but do not be fooled. That one is overly descriptive and repetitive, but still worth the journey. This one, definitely not!

I think it's time we admit, this is 100% AI at this point.

Nolan...who she just left 1 minute ago...?

Why the hell is Mera here? They are discussion the Battle Trials, and Nolan and Aurora are Cheon's teammates. What is Mera doing here? At least proofread your AI before uploading it, this is getting lazy.

I really don't want to call it AI, but I mean how does the author mix up so many things...?

I'm sorry, but this doesn't make sense. She confronted Rome about having 2 girlfriends, basically Mera and Cheon because he is always with them, but only now she pieces together that Cheon was talking about Rome? That would make sense if she just thought all 3 were close friends, but she literally talked about Rome's TWO girlfriends... Who did she think they were?

Did they not decide to be 100% honest with Naomi? Especially Belle who said she talks everything with her?

I don't really understand what the hell is happening? Why is the MC acting like a complete idiot now? Also, would it not have been better to discuss with Naomi separately before the Belle situation? And the whole mess with Belle is so ridiculous, I don't know exactly how you think interactions should be happening, but this is not it man...

Making a character stupid to advance a plot point is just lazy writing. Do better

If they were all S class apart from Soren, how does Evan stand out with anything?