Ryuzaki1

Sorry for the late reply, even though it's only been 27 days. 😅 You're absolutely right that there were a lot of mistakes in my novel, especially in Chapters 1–50. I already explained that in my review notes, and I've since revised those chapters. As for Aurelia wanting her son to get married in the middle of a war—that's actually the point. It's not because she doesn't understand the situation, but because she understands it all too well. She knows that life is short and can end at any moment. Rather than seeing her son die single, she'd rather see him find a partner as soon as possible. Besides, it's also a comedy element I intentionally added to balance out the darker and more depressing war chapters. So yes, the absurdity is completely intentional. 😅

sudah ketebak ini Authornya orang Indonesia 😅

It’s already in my bio.

Thanks for taking the time to read my works! I really appreciate the feedback. ​About Reborn as a Hated Noble Family—that was actually my very first project. Looking back, I realize the pacing in the early chapters was a bit too rushed. However, I’ve worked on adjusting it from chapter 50 onwards as I learned the craft. To be honest, I wrote it primarily because I loved the story, rather than focusing too much on external expectations. ​Oh, and thanks for the heads-up about the Discord! I’ve just set it up, and it’s still very much a work in progress, which is why the links might be a bit unstable for now. I’ll make sure to stabilize it soon! ​By the way, since you've read my works, I'd be curious to hear your thoughts on my pacing compared to other contracted novels. I'm always looking to improve!

Yeah, honestly, I think the low engagement killed my motivation over time. By around chapter 190, the views, comments, and reviews were still pretty low, so I ended up rushing the ending because I was already mentally exhausted from the story. Still, I’m happy you thought the world had potential.

Hey! I noticed you've been commenting on and supporting my novel a lot. Thanks so much, I really appreciate it. I'm building a small Discord community for loyal readers like you. There are sneak peeks, theory discussions, and exclusive updates there. I'm also looking for a few people to help as moderators. If you're interested, feel free to join first. The link is in my bio!

Halo everyone, Author here! 👋 First of all, thank you so much for reading Reborn as a Villainess: Vayne Marchioness, Mafia System up to this point. You guys are amazing! 🖤✨ I want to use this review space to chat casually with all of you. If you have any questions about the story, the characters, or anything else—feel free to drop a comment here. Or if you just want to say "Caspian best boy" or "Alaric is so fine," that's also totally welcome lol. Some things that might be frequently asked: 1. "Is this a romance?" — There is romance, but it's subtle and slow burn. No cringe, no insta-love. You might only feel it after dozens of chapters. 2. "Why doesn't Azura use magic?" — Because she's not a mage. She's a former Mafia boss. Her strength lies in strategy, precision, and... something inside her head. 3. "Will Alaric appear often?" — He is the Male Lead. So yes, he will definitely appear. But he's not the clingy type. He appears at the right moments. 4. "Who is the Author's favorite?" — Every character has a special place. But if I had to choose... maybe Lia. She's the only one who can make Azura smile. Questions for you: · Who is your favorite character so far? · Which chapter made it the hardest for you to move on? I'll be checking this review often, so don't hesitate to leave your mark here! 🫡

Some of it actually shows up gradually in later chapters through character moments... not as an infodump. But you probably haven't reached those parts yet. Thanks anyway.

1. They brought their own crystal headlamps. The cave wasn't lit only by the Mithril veins... they had their own light sources. Plus, the Mithril veins themselves glowed bright blue, enough to illuminate a cavern that size. 2. They already received the original bodies' memories from the start. So they actually 'knew' about mana and Aura passively... like recalling old lessons. The memories just weren't active until they were pushed to the brink. When Lucian was forced into a corner, his Aura came out instinctively. After that, it was briefly discussed in Chapter 14... Rianor called it 'Aura Manifestation.' It wasn't sudden... it was dormant knowledge finally activating. 3. The difference lies in how they channel mana. Knights flow mana inward... resulting in Aura that enhances their physical body. Mages release mana outward... resulting in elemental magic or spatial manipulation. Two different paths, and usually, a person can only master one

BTW.. thanks for your comment