daisyjolliffe

I’m going to review again after reading the newest chapters! Oh my! It’s all I can say. Everything is spot on. I feel drawn to the characters and love the pacing. The humor tangled with the endless ups and downs and the relentless power of the main character driving him forward despite his bad luck. Proving the odds against him wrong. I feel this book will blow up once it’s out in the world more. Fast paced, comical, relatable main character. The storyline is fantastic and makes me want even more. I’d happily binge read the entire book. Random plot changes, chance for possible romance or heartbreaks, a god literally making him the most unlucky guy there and lots of awesome detailed fights. With the occasional update on the rest of the worlds shortcomings with the current situation. Beautiful writing style with lots of 🤯😱 moments along the way. 10000/10 recommend to give this book a read and add to your library as the updates keep getting better and better. Keep up the good work 💪🏻🤩

I don’t think I can wait long for the next chapter 😍 so nervous to see what’s coming but so excited to see what new skills he will unlock 🤩

Brilliant start, had me hooked straight away. So excited to see the story develop. Added to my library so I can keep up with new chapters 😍

I’ve just binge read the whole of this so far. And omg it’s amazing, the plot and storyline is incredible and the general outline is amazing. The characters are great and a good amount of comedy to match the thrill of the fast paced storyline. I do hope he returns to the hidden village eventually, I definitely see her gardening powers being useful 🤩

Brilliant start to a book, looking forward to new updates. Great writing style and got me hooked straight away!

Amazing writing, was hooked on the first chapter. The characters are great and relatable. Looking forward to reading more!

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Amazing start of book, really excited to see the plot develop. Characters are great and interesting. Good quality of writing as well. Looking forward to the next updates!

Well written and a very good storyline. Very excited to see the new chapters and character design is great!