Unseen_Oneer

After skimming through this story, I have found that although it has a very nicely concept, the execution is quite bad. Although I can only say for the first handful of chapters, it doesn't look like anything will change, maybe it will even get worse. The writing seems to be made by a brand new author, the story development just jumps around a lot, nothing really progressing in a smooth way. Characters are one dimensional, nothing really going on with them. The only thing I can rate four stars is he world background, which seems to be a bit interesting, but that may also be butchered later on.