Justl_B

Mayor a fool fr

Honestly, Reno is the realest guy in this village. Reasonable crashout

Houses seem more affordable there than in the real world

I really like the development of your writing quality, its gotten way better since your first shot at it, but I think that the "paragraphs" are way too uneven in length. While some are just 1 sentence, some are like 8 sentences at once, which can break the reading flow. The thoughts of the characters in brackets also sometimes confuses me, I would prefer a different font for them, but thats probably moreso the fault of the website. The main characters, Luna and Reno are fun and their interactions can be pretty funny, but many other characters fall flat and are one dimensional, often unnamed. I would prefer some deeper descriptions of the characters, mostly their appearence. The world itself is pretty solid, but its nothing special yet. I personally really like the, sometimes pretty on the nose, humor. The sarcasm isnt agressive or extreme and is nicely balanced with the serious elements of the story, so it doesnt feel like a completly unserious story. I am not even a tenth into it, but I am hooked and gonna continue reading it!

Reno boutta be rich

Damn Reno, you could have said that nicer

This is my favorite chapter from the ones released yet because the very human interactions between Reno and Luna are really good. Lunas insecurities and past seem interesting and I cant wait to learn more about her backstory.

The idea of a father figure in a new world seems really interesting, but I have a gut feeling that the mayor is gonna be punished for him and his villagers heavily dislking the king at one moment. Lets hope our buy Reno can do some damage until then

Reno realest Isekai MC

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