TruthfulCritic

It's just....meh. It has it's moment, but too drawn out and nothing new that hasn't been seen before. Still somewhat decent read

The writer did an amazing job of portraying emotions and moral philosophy, as well as showing human side of mc. I was looking forward to it as I have rarely seen a fanfic that delves into Lovecraftian mythology. Will check on RoyalRoad

They were born with power. They fought Cronos for survival, not to do a better job.

Keep up the holy work brother 👊🏻

This has huge potential if the minor issues are addressed like mc personality and some character development for his players and club spirit. I don't mind the comedic aspect and business, but I'd prefer if he had some club legends too. Everything else is perfect. I barely noticed it unless you mentioned it's a translation! That's really great work. I can say this can become the best manager fic here with time and effort. I'll rate it 4.5 stars due to the good effort, and filtering the chinesy vibe 😂 ( saw the rants)