Really_Annoyed

I’m completely with you on this but with one exception. Some novels, not this one, like to repeat everything 12 times. I understand why you might repeat something if it’s been a 100 chapters, but some novels repeat things over and over right away. There are even some who repeat themselves several times in the same chapter. That drives me nuts. Slow for the sake of description isn’t a bad thing though. I like it.

The good: Character design: The characters are great. All of them are great. Mids: world design. It looks like it will be good but we haven’t seen too much even at 100 chapters. The bad: Super slow story progression. The very bad: Item description and status announcements: normally I like those, (I am a number cruncher) but entire chapters of item description and frequent status updates for items wears you down. TLDR: Would be amazing if less time was spent on items and more time was spent on people.

Great chapter and nicely done cliff hanger!

Ironic since she literally is lol

I’m guessing he means Japanese, which I believe but am too lazy to google is “aoi tenshi”

I’m a married man with two kids and don’t play female characters. I am also a healer main… lol

I’m starting to pity Ryan just like Chris. Sydney doesn’t stop. It was cute and fun at first, but she doesn’t stop. She exhausting just to read much less be in a relationship with.

Fair enough. I stand corrected. Just an awkward cliff hanger. I like your writing so that surprises me.

Not even a cliff hanger. That’s a stop mid sentence because word quota was reached

Boo cliffhanger for the sake of cliffhanger.