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Smanga_RTN

Smanga_RTN

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“Just a guy with a huge imagination :) Writing worlds, building stories, and working on stuff

2025-04-30 JoinedGlobal
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  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Noob_Cool

    when writing i have this wierd mantality of like if i can read it surely everyone can a Shame my book got rejected a contract byut iIwill still finish the story and make another where i fix my mistakes and re apply thanks for the support and consider reading it to the end its'snot that many words's Just 167,975K see small amount there's book with more and if you liked this one you will like codex of Art's

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Noob_Cool

    am your number 1 fan do drop by and check out my work

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Miriam_Smith_1283

    i been writing for year now but only dicided now to post on a site why you ask

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Posted

    Loved the story writing quality was good until I felt it loose emotion like it was AI at some point Update stability umm it's new do got 2 chapter it's okay Story development it's not that unique and feels over-used Maybe add your unique twist Charecter design lonely no one cares is little overused I recommend giving him a unique traits Loved it but it felt mid And yeah you escalation was to fast from roof top to to bridge but it sorta would work if you represent him of him just thinking about it the snapping to reality on the bridge That my honest review I will update it when more contaxt is there good luck

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Bookspark084

    sorry to say but I don't do off platform suggestions or tips anytghingof that sort of you want to suggest something just say it here thanks for reading ☺️

    This book has been deleted.
  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Mike_Dave

    sorry but I don't take suggestions tips off the platform my book is in if you want to suggest just drop it here I don't do off platform

    This book has been deleted.
  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Haley23

    thanks appreciate the opinio

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Juanpablo_Gomez

    Escribir no es fácil desde mi teléfono (Android), pero intento llegar a unas 2000 palabras por capítulo. ¡Gracias por leer! También tuve que traducir tu comentario — quizá la próxima vez en inglés para que lo entienda más rápido. I appreciate the comment so I replied in your language

  • Smanga_RTN
    Smanga_RTN9 months ago
    Replied to Juanpablo_Gomez

    writing is not easy on my prospective because am in android i try to get them to 2k thanks for reading and I took time translating your comments .... yeah maybe English Next time so i understand