Tiredd

Another one !!

So Nerisa’s a fate angel? She sus not gonna lie.

This was very sad. :(

Bro

hi author, well i have a suggestion about the chapters title, it seem too short i think.

well i'm with kael, he didn't specifiy.

welcome to my belover

damnn

At first, I didn't understand much — the Pulses, the Bloodlines, the Gates, the Tremont... it all seemed mysterious and full of hidden secrets. Even now, I only grasp a part of it, but that's exactly what makes it so intriguing. As for the main character, honestly, I didn't like him at first because he relied a lot on others. But after Chapter 14, he became absolutely incredible. My favorite character, though, has to be the Voice (or Nyros). He's hilarious and clearly hiding so many secrets. I couldn't help but look forward to every scene he appeared in. The world-building is fantastic — truly one of the strongest points of the story. And to be honest, I couldn’t stop reading. After finishing one chapter, I immediately had to move on to the next. For now, I'll give this story a 4.2 , only because I still don't understand everything yet — but it has huge potential. Please continue, author. You can do it!