Mystic_warrior18

Review mainly for the acadamy arc. Every chapter is very repetitive. Every day, the students do and say the same thing. Rowan stands against the wall and says one sentence with no meaningful interaction. Mira and Evelyn talk between themselves with one word sentences with no substance. Auralion tries to be some deep professor with answering questions with one word riddles. And at the end of the day, he stands with seraphina and again one word answers that mean absolutely nothing. There are also some chapters with the exploration that Sally pops up there. Somehow, it's very confusing. I've written this because I do enjoy the premise of the novel and think at Has potential, but these things really annoyed me.

Isn't Evelyn supposed to be a swordswomen from the knighheart family?Isn't she supposed to use aura?

Plus - completely forgot the female orc that was in love with the MC!! Where did she go???

Good novel. M biggest problem is that the MC is supposed to be some tactical genius, but he is kind of stupid. He knows there is magic in this worldand he barely uses it. He runs to conquer a new kingdom in the desert before he even unifies most of the orcs. There are so many bad choices.

is Nymeria really dead???????

Why are you making the MC such an idiot? He is supposed to be an adult. He was reborn, not truly a 5 year old.

What happened to the novel? Haven't updated a new chapters in a while

I really enjoyed reading this novel. only problem is your author notes in the middle of the chapters.