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Please change the word chess in this story to Go. Go is a far superior tactical game. Although westerners know of chess they also know of Go. Please correct this? Playing both at a reasonable level for Go and beating Master levels regularly in Chess. Goh is far superior

A great story innovative with a few more new ideas that go back at least 2.4 billion years.

this is a lot of fun to read with some mystery as well

Dear author this is not to you but to this site here which is stopping the latest book for everyone being downloaded to New Zealand why is that i have read hundreds of books here and now you stop me downloading . Why please explain?

Great story. i am literally waiting for the next chapters

I have and will do in the future too

this is so much fun to read. this is so good and yes this is well written with characters what's happening very well written story I'm so looking forward to what's happening next.

a great start to a great book by the look of it I'm certainly looking forward to the rest

A truly beautiful heart filled story with real people real feelings and real happenings with earned good luck happening with good morals some hard times and real love where a big brother makes a world of great good difference for his little sister. And friendships that grow inspite of not so nice trivia.

Absolutely brilliant story better than Tolkien ever wrote. This Soo real in so many different ways without any low level rubbish that only media use to justify pulling down the human race. This is uplifting to be recommended for every good reason. Dear Author may you keep writing for the rest of this and many other lives. You truly are an asset to humanity. The following after this is so wide open after this. I look forward to reading many more of your stories after this