newbieOrca

my novel writing until chapter 29 feels a bit forced and stiff and not natural enough also Li yuan tian is way too nonchalant or has like a mysterious behavior syndrome or 8th grader syndrome I have improved it in chapter 31 made it more natural with Li yuan tian being more humane and more conversation with side characters i realised that i started writing this book because I like reading novels of clan building and all so i have tried writing this novel from chapter 31 as a reader would so any suggestion etc would be appreciated thanks yours author newbie_orca (⁠^⁠^⁠)

I like the pov style writing of this novel gives it a new perspective, good story and I do hope that the author updates new chapters^⁠_⁠^

I have sent you a friend request do accept it and then we can talk about this thnks ^⁠_⁠^

this novel give a strong feeling of underdog narrative like yue's struggle and her life in the imperial court ig? in the imperial harem and her decision and all overall give the story a direction great story ^⁠_⁠^

thnk you

shut up you hater ಠ⁠︵⁠ಠ

what does no mean ???

why ? why is it not good please say like are the chapters not long enough? or is there any thing you didn't like ?? please reply so I may improve it

why bro ? please specify why it is trash?? and sorry if you feel this is trash just give me suggestions to improve my novel

great book worth reading and has interesting plot