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  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Replied to Ghost_Quill

    I'm sorry to bother you, but readers want details about his daily life: what he did, where he went, and his future plans. These are some of the things I love about real-life Pokémon stories. Thank you, and I feel I've bothered you. My apologies.

  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Replied to ENDWALKER

    On this site, I haven't seen a single truly good novel that I liked, except for one. Don't forget that the people who write these novels are fans.

  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Posted

    The novel is very good, but I haven't seen anyone in the forest yet, which is strange since the world is realistic. Surely some people will notice the protagonist and ambush him in the forest. Do you understand me, author? Also, let the protagonist awaken his psychic powers, and the events are moving too fast. Make it a little more realistic. Thank you. The novel is very good, and we want 2000 chapters.

  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Posted

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  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Posted

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  • ggghf
    ggghf2 months ago
    Posted

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  • ggghf
    ggghf3 months ago
    Replied to Truthfully

    I couldn't finish it; there's Chinese gibberish in the novel. But let's leave that aside. The writing style feels like artificial intelligence. You can learn from the novel *Freedom*. Honestly, I'm talking to you now because your novel has potential, and I don't mean any offense.

  • ggghf
    ggghf3 months ago
    Posted

    Honestly, writer, the novel isn't good. It has potential, but its flaws are numerous. I'll mention a few points: First, what is the blue hue? Hondom's aura is blue, and his eyes turn blue; I don't know what that means. Second, the writing style feels artificial. We don't know anything about the protagonist's past before his death, and his system is very strong. I suggest you weaken it. There are many unnecessary complications in the novel.