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The story is beautiful and the comedy is wonderful, but there are many spelling mistakes. Focus on the translation because it is one of the most important aspects of the novels.

I wrote the cheese and it is the West

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You be my friend, I won't focus on anything related to the original story, but rather I will focus on the development of the character and expanding her arsenal of spells and magic

I want to expand the story further, and not have the hero stay in just one path. Through the return system, he can go back to any moment in his life and change whatever he wants. I want to have him learn magic and some crafts, and then I'll start with the main story.

Good or bad, add your comment if possible. I hope you describe the novel, is it understandable, and point out the correct and incorrect words, if possible.

My language is Arabic, not English.So I don't know how it will be after translation.