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it's good better than the other one for sure so keep updating and yh it's ok byakuya is actually done better in here the other one I like this one better

This chapter was disappointing also there five forms of susanoo you forgot the budda like form before the perfect susanoo

with the way things are going is byakuya gonna leave eto or is he taking her with him if so he's going to have to tell the the truth of his existance

Good story my only complaint is that the chapters are short and byakuya is to I don't know not real like I feel he could be more open with eto