zarian898

ooooo beth is more than nuclear pisssed

didn't he kill arys the story is all over the place good concept poorly done

story is all over the place

that was satisfying

thought the characters name was Noah

I can barely pay bills and get food so no

the writing needs work there is a lot of mistakes

i agree OCS in some stories are good but for a shown sons there are so many potential love interest an oc is kinda not smart

would be better William can take Arthur to battle to teach him the horrors of war and what to do and what not to do

beth better live