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Veranooo

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  • Veranooo
    Veranooo3 months ago
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    The pacing is great so it doesn't feel boring at all, the romance development is perfect for web novel its fast but not too fast either especially the intimacy people usually just went straight to bed but this time is actually progressing step by step. It'd be nice if there's some lemons here and there the one not just getting skipped, like every first experience?. But so far it's such a great read

  • Veranooo
    Veranooo4 months ago
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    DISCLAIMER - I ONLY READ UNTIL CH 30ISH Not my cup of tea tbh, the way author tell the story is less dialogue and more explaining just like bed time story, it makes me bored and tired. And theres too many unnecessary info dump that probably could either get shortened or removed entirely in the chapter, so there's more dialogue between the character (i like it more if the info dump is tell by using conversation between the chara). Even though the pacing kinda slow, overall it wasn't a bad fic. -The mc isn't annoying and extremely overpowered -The way things progressing isn't forced -The character like gojo or geto pretty similar from the original Other than the reason I've explained, i dropped this because there's not enough "HOOK" or anticipation to make me keep reading.