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Brother it's clear you're deleting comments that criticize the story's narrative style it is like a summary The protagonist acts as if he's possessed Ace's original personality is weak yet you make him a character with willpower For God's sake at least if you made the transmuter the original character and merged Ace's spirit with him I could understand how a character could develop in an instant.

The novel isn't bad but I'm looking for a time-traveling story like *A Regressor Tale of Cultivation* where the protagonist is intelligent and has a strong personality This protagonist relives everything as if in a game I don't understand if he wants to live eternity in this time loop He's surprised by Zach's experience and training seeing it as a waste of time He's a protagonist without goals and with a weak personality not my type of hero .However the world-building is excellent the characters are well-developed and their relationships are deep My only problem is the protagonist's character I don't like characters without goals that kind of character is annoying If Zach were the protagonist the novel would be much better of course with some common sense Even without it he's still better than the protagonist

Trash What is this damn obsession with his mother and the girls You took a novel with great potential and ruined it and made it unreadable if you are obsessed with your mother go and see a psychiatrist because this is not normal

The writer wants to anger the readers In the beginning the hero suffers from memory loss and he has Barry Allen's memory and feelings but he insists that he is another person When most readers criticized him for that he tried to make it seem as if he did not regain his memory and suddenly in the middle of the novel he regains his memory What was before chapter 30 is a copy of the same original show and the novel does not improve but rather gets worse I drop it in chapter 50 I could no longer bear it after his memory returned He became worse than it was

Well bro if he doesn't remember his previous life then that means he's Barry Allen I don't want to watch the show in novel form

I don't understand if he was a child before he was transformed. He's a cowardly, willless person who clings to Shin like a dog.

Go read it on wtr-lab over 600 chapter American TV Series: Starting with Sheldon’s Wool Collection

Very good keep going.........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

When George dies will his father die too?

Okay the novel is very good but you are stealing chapters from another novel There are a few novels about the Young Sheldon show the ather novel was finished a year before you started writing itvThe problem is that you copied the same chapters and the same events but changed the name from Jimmy to Mike that's stilling