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So, is the novel complete, or is there more? nice going tho,

tftc now more!!

im choking,🤣🤣🤣🤣 the how, awesome. thing went lile bam

a must

Great story and some characters but wtf is it with everyone making assumptions every time? especially with the corporate drone meeting that woman in the cave, that was just blind ignorance mixed with stupidity like how not to trust strangers a basic fact, then the inconsistency, then he was naked(relative) the woman on top of him and.. ah yapping. good story for some but i hate making some seem grown then show such naivety suddenly. Especially after he came back to the cave and saw her again.

writing 4 story 1 char 1 update 3.5 wrld bg 2.5 Author, next time you use such an anime where OP beings roam around everywhere, plz sufficiently prep your MCs background. You just made a transmigrator who apparently only knows part of the story, look so stupid, then went ahead and plot amoured the dude into not dying in the first chaps, then even after that made him into some submissive boy who cant think when faced with overwhelming odds, like how do you get to be an arch demon without the magicules to cover it or the physic? ati you had to use a skill to beat up a greater demon, or how when Guy shows up he immediately cowers using plot knowledge is not a crime author especially when saving your life, how in heavens name was he not able ID blanc as Ria even with so many clues? and its Juane not joone. Don't use that xianxia thinking style in a J anime/manga/novel premise. Quite annoying when you started out great. And that POV back n forth skip is quite annoying then you take the whole chap to write it, not ok.

tftc but where are the nxt CHs

havent read so this is.................................................................................................................................................

Yes a fic is better if its different and i totally agree on some points though the story is good the pacing is kinda(well disastrously) slow for such a fic dont know if it changes in the later chapters i just got bored and came here. Writing 5 updates 5/4 story dev 3 - to each his own character design 1/2 falls n mc probably just me and no patience with cringe-worth choices and actions wrld bg 4/3 yall know tensura

tftc Now the story is partly more mystery