BerryBerri

I really love that there are music recs. It makes it so immersive. Such a cool idea

i love the tension build!

I love where this is going. The writing is engaging, a few little blips and typos, but that doesn't detract from the pull. This would do well as a published series. Will be following this story along and at this point it's my only hope that there's actual writers on this app. Love your work. Keep going

I'll be real, I couldnt hack the writing style. Its a bit too Woe Is Me and was a chore to read. With some polish it has promise. Building out the surroundings to portray a feeling instead of internal dialogue can engage readers a lot more. Keep going