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Brainless

I hate every single peraon in ghis novel. The Author never was tortured cause he will nog be grateful but hateful towards the 3th party that orchestrated it

Failed

Honestly so much better and faster to say

This novel seems more ,,Urban,, theme then ,,Fantasy,,

Instead of this ,,one requires,, would be much more logical in this context

The ,,the others,, feels so unfitting

BRUH WE KNOW HE HAS A PERFECT MEMORY AND MORE STOP REPEATING THIS SHI/t

I still don’t get how he gained it already, I thought if will take some time until he trains all letters techniques to some degree or whatever it definitely feels to fast for him to posses it already. It feels so out of nowhere

So much repeating bullsh(it… this already feels like your hoard novel at the end chapters. More focused on milking the novel with unnecessary repetition and side characters perspectives then writing a good plot.