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Decent chapter 1 although no chapter since it was published 5 days ago, really quick character development for the heroine to make us attached to her before setting up the world background, interested to see where it goes
Only 4 chapters in at the time of this review, the story is well written although there was a weird transition from 1st to 3rd pov towards the end of chap 1, the mc is decently written and easy to hate which is what he is there for, the plot could pick up a little later for now I found he accepted his fate and the system too easily and him being an Isekai addict definetly didn't fit him, the world background there isn't enough content to rate it properly yet but I believe it will be a well fleshed out world, definetly worth reading if you're looking for a mc that isn't a self-insert.
A good chapter one that really set up the mc well, it would have been better to keep the 1st p.o.v until the end but still nice introduction to the story.
I can't say yet, it's a mystery
what's "et" ?
yes, those were his previous clothes, it was a baseball jacket from the local team of his local team back in the world he came from
were*
You're*
some misprunonciation here I think