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Shinji_Nubeko4 months agoPostedDecent chapter 1 although no chapter since it was published 5 days ago, really quick character development for the heroine to make us attached to her before setting up the world background, interested to see where it goes
This book has been deleted.- Shinji_Nubeko9 months agoPosted
Only 4 chapters in at the time of this review, the story is well written although there was a weird transition from 1st to 3rd pov towards the end of chap 1, the mc is decently written and easy to hate which is what he is there for, the plot could pick up a little later for now I found he accepted his fate and the system too easily and him being an Isekai addict definetly didn't fit him, the world background there isn't enough content to rate it properly yet but I believe it will be a well fleshed out world, definetly worth reading if you're looking for a mc that isn't a self-insert.
- Shinji_Nubeko9 months agoCommented
A good chapter one that really set up the mc well, it would have been better to keep the 1st p.o.v until the end but still nice introduction to the story.
- Shinji_Nubeko10 months agoReplied to Lord_Adinant
I can't say yet, it's a mystery
- Shinji_Nubekoa year agoCommented
what's "et" ?
This book has been deleted. - Shinji_Nubekoa year agoReplied to ess642000
yes, those were his previous clothes, it was a baseball jacket from the local team of his local team back in the world he came from
- Shinji_Nubekoa year agoCommented
were*
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You're*
This paragraph has been deleted. - Shinji_Nubekoa year agoCommented
some misprunonciation here I think
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