TheLordAnos

No one commented, look at these kids Still too early for a long ahh review

It's good frfr, good writing, can't say much about the story it's only 1 chapter afterall If I can then will edit this after 30 chapters ig (This is just to reach the minimum word required for review)

Good writing bro, can't say much about the story because it's only the first chapter

Pottage tastes good tho😔😔

It's fucking amazing, an amazing first chapter, the characters look good too, good story, pretty good naming, I'm hoping a really good novel. And the most important part, IT'S WRITTEN BY MY BROOOO, SO FUCK YEAH, YOU BET IT'S GETTING A 5 STAR

Finally I can comment, made an account just for this😔😔 It's really good for a first chapter bro, I'm expecting a really good stuff so please don't disappoint me