Samule_Umitit

U laugh? But it’s true. This is why u will get nowhere as a author

Don’t get ahead of yourself. You’ve made the mc pitiful and his parents surpass him in every way. This novel has so much potential if you just made the mc more assertive towards Women. We know this is going to be single FL and obviously Luna but please don’t make the same mistake as you did with his parents onto him and Luna. He should be the one in charge.

Ain’t it a bit odd that’s she’s on the throne? While he’s standing behind like a submissive bodyguard to her

The author doesn’t know, he just tells the AI to give a detailed expression. This novel is clearly written by AI, Way too much detailed and Over exaggerated Words. The AI also made the Mc pitifully dumb. Dropped

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s r-18 and harem tags I would expect it

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s a harem tag

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s a harem tag

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s a harem tag

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children if author desired to add them since there’s a harem tag

Good novel so far, hopefully Mc stays cold hearted to his enemies early on and potentially adding aspects like early pregnancy with this harem so it won’t turn into a baseless harem without rivalry so they should compete for his 1st child that will add to the story and character development because what’s a good reason for character development yes it’s unexpected pregnancy and preparing to be a father witch has rarely happened in other novels that wait until epilogue for children(just a suggestion) Really hope u listen to this it could attract more viewers thanks!! it would be suitable to have children after the academy arc if author desired to add them since there’s a harem tag