Brainstorm_986

then go for it, as I said, beside the MC sudden change of personality, what I read of the novel is quite well written

I'm not sure what do you mean, I just pointed out a grammar error, i think is the least I can do when I'm reading a novel for free

yeah, still weird

that actually would make a lot of sense

I'm gonna guess is "it wasn't* deep enough"

"slowly" is repeated

truly love??

where the heck is the author from that in 1993 they didn't have flush toilets??