Katilyy6

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Poor Louis constantly let out

I hope when she founds out how he handled her sickness and just didn’t tell her the truth she stays strong for herself. Like come on.. you couldn’t have told your wife the truth but decided to make it worse and PHYSICALLY and emotionally cheat on her basically right in front of her? Nah he would be done in my book

Yeah it’s just so annoying I’m like even if it’s ended how I’m assuming it will him having a fake affair and showing Olivia he’s with another woman which she has never seen him cheat or anything I think will tear her apart even more. there has been so much in this book that it’s so annoying that this is how the last couple of weeks are. like no lessons learned until what the last like 2 chapters ? lol

How can you say you love her but not let your last month be in peace and love and time with your kids and her? This is insane and so dumb. she lost four years with you because of Levi and couldn’t be with you by your bed side and your doing this again? when you guys just got okay again?? I get the ending is coming soon but come on.. this just makes people not even want to finish reading because it just feels like it’s going in never ending annoying circles getting dragged out. I’ve never been so annoyed with characters and a story line ending

Are you kidding me right now? Writer stop repeating mistakes over and over this is literally dragging the story out even if your ending it some other ending couldn’t of been this ?? Repeating over and over this is ridiculous

I am so done

Olivia is really starting to rub me the wrong way. So you punish them for weeks to leave you alone even after Lennox came back from death twice and you were so torn up about it and still abandoned all of them. Levi and Louis I get needing space from but Lennox? he just hid his identity to find out who killedhim. And now because you said that to him he has to immediately forgive you? If it was the other way around she would be so prideful and mean and way worse to him. she is super prideful thinking it’s all about her and took Lennox for granted. She doesn’t deserve his love

Alright I love the characters and the plot but author come on, the story line is going crazy. How can kash act so pridefu like he did absolutely nothing ?? And it feels like everything is a never ending circle. Like 200 chapters in and no reveals of how his family treated her? Just left with him still not really believing her. And then she never mentioned he texted her that he chose Lara in the beginning but it was really Lara on his phone at dinner? Like are we forgetting all this?? I’m getting so annoyed at the dragging out and the non stop non acknowledgement of anything that has happened. Like it’s crazy to me he literally cheated on her for a river to help save his mate. Like why not just tell her the truth and they figure it out together… cause why would she even wanna be with him after sleeping and marrying someone even if it was fake?? like yeah he is saving her but it totally could of been handled a different way. Your making the female lead a weak lead and the male lead just a continuing oblivious character

Alright this is just getting dragged out at this point. Another person going for her? What happened to her being devastated about Lennox dying twice?? And now that’s he back she leaves them all… clearly she didn’t love him like she claimed she did because she left AGAIN after all the “grieving” she went through. Like come on?!