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It doesn't make sense. Tang San's Datura snake gives him greater control and endurance. Her poison isn't very strong, at least not when used by Tang San. And if that's the case, Kazuki seemed very pleased when he obtained the poison mist effect from his own spirit ring.

I appreciate your feedback. It really makes me think about some things. If you have any ideas or suggestions for how it could be improved, please write them here. I like to receive criticism, especially when I see that it is right. But I also appreciate ideas. As you know, I write this in my free time, so I don't have much creativity. Maybe with an idea or two, the chapters could come out even more frequently.

Não vou me dar o trabalho de escrever em inglês para alguém que não entende uma (Fanfic). Obviamente terá coisas diferentes. Quer seguir a lógica do original, leia o original. Aqui a energia Rank-Bronze é gasosa, enquanto a Prateada é mais condensada. Obviamente uma perde o efeito sobre ele quando ele faz um avanço. Se não eu poderia simplesmente fazer ele sair caçando milhares de Rank-Bronze Bestas e se cultivar muito mais rápido. E sinceramente, se ele usar inteligência para se viver naquele mundo, não terá história.

Hey! Thanks for the review. And sorry, I didn't really read many of the TDG. The ones I read and found interesting stopped being updated, and some were deleted from the Internet. Now I look for the older ones, looking for references to write about, but most of them change a lot from the Original TDG.

No. It is only released at dawn and dusk. But it does not accumulate. He can only use it twice a day.

Indeed. Her willpower is very high. But if I were to continue with this, I would have to write a lot more, to get the same result she had with Nie Li, giving up and asking for his help. Besides, it becomes much more complicated for me to do the translation, because when I go over 2000 words the app stops working or leaves everything wrong. So either I make a more coherent and acceptable summary, or I write two chapters to get the same result.

Yes, it is original. I write in Portuguese and then use an APP to translate it into English and make it more fluid. But the APP I used left a lot of words missing, so I had to use another one.

In the novel Shen Xiu is Three Star Silver. If I'm not mistaken, in Donghua too.

I will also leave my humble five star review for my hard work. It may not be the best TDG Fanfic, but I only write for my own fun, and now only in my free time, so I leave Five Stars here!😁😁👊

I'm thinking about the harem, but I probably won't add Ye Ziyun. I don't have a day to update the chapters, it might come out one, two or three a day, but it might also not come out at all for a week. And yes, I like Shen Xiu, so she will be in the Harem.