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Thanks for your kind words. This story is something I'm doing in between my other projects, just for a laugh and a distraction.

Thank you for your words. Honestly, this story is very special to me. I wrote the first 30 thousand words years ago and only at the beginning of the year did I decide to finish it. Originally it was much more tragic, since I left out two arcs, maybe because I wanted to keep it young and not so adult (I left out the arc of Sofía's editor who stole her story and her heart, that's why she is like that in the beginning, and the arc of Tomás's father). I'm currently looking for an illustrator for Necky and Galf, another of my stories. I'll definitely follow you on Instagram and I recommend another of my stories: "The Archmage Retires" which is already in its final arc. Once again I thank you for your encouragement and kind words. On my patreon.com/ricardoalvarado I write at least once a week and upload other projects. A huge hug... The author XD

Tell me, as soon as I have time I will answer [img=thinking]

Thanks for taking the time. I hope to make it even more interesting.[img=recommend][img=recommend]

"Great start. I really liked the atmosphere and it seems to be coming along quite well. I think I'll be reading more. If you want, you can check out my novel, 'Aimex: The last war.' If I could offer one piece of advice, it would be not to break the rhythm with so many new paragraphs, especially if you're going to continue talking about the same thing." [img=recommend]

A good start. I hope the story breaks away from the clichés. For now, it seems to follow the typical story of climbing the tower and revenge, but I hope it's much more than that. I invite you to read my novel: Aimex: The Last War.

Be careful when switching the speaking subject. Throughout the chapter, you speak from the "I" position; switching to the second person is a mistake.

The story is well written, but be careful about putting dialogues from two different characters in the same paragraph, that is grammatically incorrect.

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