Immortal_XI

To be honest, I agree with someone’s comment. Instead of constantly moving on to new worlds, the MC would be better off developing the story in the previous worlds. As an author, you shouldn’t rush to wrap everything up with a monologue either. Provide details whenever the MC achieves something.

He uses AI to come up with the plot and revises it so it doesn’t seem too obvious, which is why the main character’s personality is often inconsistent—and the same goes for the other characters

Yes, the author is clearly too lazy to focus on a single story, and he gets bored easily.

At this point, the author is really reluctant to write dialogue and action scenes. He’d rather spend his time writing the narrative and the MC’s internal monologues.

Two chapters consisting of 85% narrative and monologues—it’s incredibly boring. Author, you’re so lazy. I’m not talking about the update frequency, but the lack of dialogue and action in each chapter. It’s better to take the time to write a high-quality chapter than to release daily chapters of this quality. However, I know you don’t really listen to your readers’ suggestions and criticism.

MC's personality is inconsistent

The MC's personality suddenly changes here, and as your other readers have said, it feels forced.

(2) I remember another writer once said that when he doesn't have a specific idea for the plot and is bored at the same time... he has two options, stop writing for a while or write what he wouldn't normally write. For example in this author's case, she could try making the MC more honest and stop being a hypocrite. He said he wouldn't do 'that' with a woman without having an inner bond, but what he did to that Dryad and several other women didn't reflect that... The MC is often passive as if the women are pushing him to do it with them. Honestly, this hinders what the MC and the author can do in making progress. From the point of view of a reader like me since the genre of this book is Harem, he certainly has nothing else to get involved with many women, right? Is he going to continue being passive like that? I can't help hating the MC for that. The author could also take some ideas from the development that the readers want. Instead of asking about what worlds are interesting, ask what plots they'd like to see and if none of them fit, do the option I said before.

I remember another writer once said that when he doesn't have a specific idea for the plot and is bored at the same time... he has two options, stop writing for a while or write what he wouldn't normally write. For example in this author's case, she could try making the MC more honest and stop being a hypocrite. He said he wouldn't do 'that' with a woman without having an inner bond, but what he did to that Dryad and several other women didn't reflect that... The MC is often passive as if the women are pushing him to do it with them. Honestly, this hinders what the MC and the author can do in making progress. From the point of view of a reader like me since the genre of this book is Harem, he certainly has nothing else to get involved with many women, right? Is he going to continue being passive like that? I can't help hating the MC for that. The author could also take some ideas from the development that the readers want. Instead of asking about what worlds are interesting, ask what plots they'd like to see and if none of them fit, do the option I said before.

He just wants more people to comment to overcome his motivational crisis in writing