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  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI2d ago
    Replied to OmenKroy

    He uses AI to come up with the plot and revises it so it doesn’t seem too obvious, which is why the main character’s personality is often inconsistent—and the same goes for the other characters

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI2d ago
    Replied to PrinceOfThisWorld

    Yes, the author is clearly too lazy to focus on a single story, and he gets bored easily.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI2d ago
    Replied to AmIHorny

    At this point, the author is really reluctant to write dialogue and action scenes. He’d rather spend his time writing the narrative and the MC’s internal monologues.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI2d ago
    Commented

    Two chapters consisting of 85% narrative and monologues—it’s incredibly boring. Author, you’re so lazy. I’m not talking about the update frequency, but the lack of dialogue and action in each chapter. It’s better to take the time to write a high-quality chapter than to release daily chapters of this quality. However, I know you don’t really listen to your readers’ suggestions and criticism.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI22d ago
    Replied to AmIHorny

    MC's personality is inconsistent

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XI22d ago
    Commented

    The MC's personality suddenly changes here, and as your other readers have said, it feels forced.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XIa month ago
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    (2) I remember another writer once said that when he doesn't have a specific idea for the plot and is bored at the same time... he has two options, stop writing for a while or write what he wouldn't normally write. For example in this author's case, she could try making the MC more honest and stop being a hypocrite. He said he wouldn't do 'that' with a woman without having an inner bond, but what he did to that Dryad and several other women didn't reflect that... The MC is often passive as if the women are pushing him to do it with them. Honestly, this hinders what the MC and the author can do in making progress. From the point of view of a reader like me since the genre of this book is Harem, he certainly has nothing else to get involved with many women, right? Is he going to continue being passive like that? I can't help hating the MC for that. The author could also take some ideas from the development that the readers want. Instead of asking about what worlds are interesting, ask what plots they'd like to see and if none of them fit, do the option I said before.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XIa month ago
    Commented

    I remember another writer once said that when he doesn't have a specific idea for the plot and is bored at the same time... he has two options, stop writing for a while or write what he wouldn't normally write. For example in this author's case, she could try making the MC more honest and stop being a hypocrite. He said he wouldn't do 'that' with a woman without having an inner bond, but what he did to that Dryad and several other women didn't reflect that... The MC is often passive as if the women are pushing him to do it with them. Honestly, this hinders what the MC and the author can do in making progress. From the point of view of a reader like me since the genre of this book is Harem, he certainly has nothing else to get involved with many women, right? Is he going to continue being passive like that? I can't help hating the MC for that. The author could also take some ideas from the development that the readers want. Instead of asking about what worlds are interesting, ask what plots they'd like to see and if none of them fit, do the option I said before.

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XIa month ago
    Replied to AmIHorny

    He just wants more people to comment to overcome his motivational crisis in writing

  • Immortal_XI
    Immortal_XIa month ago
    Commented

    The Author is too fond of switching between worlds because he gets bored easily. Instead of a new world, why not continue the progress in the previous worlds? Although the way women in each world fall in love with the MC is very boring, and some even get into romantic relationships with him right away. You're also too fond of using timeskip to miss many details.