TheDapperSquid

It is ai idk what this author is saying

Sorry what's this a reference to?

lol ok dude whatever you say

Crazy deflection with the money point. I was simply asking why you feel the need to pass ai writing off as handwritten. You can explain it however you like, like I said I’m not willing to give the burner account with literal zero history the benefit of the doubt that it just happens to have a writing style that mimics ai almost perfectly. Best of luck with whatever purpose you posted this with

It's very clear just from reading it, but if you want specific examples: the way it describes the togruta the repeated dashes like the "she raised an eyebrow - or the togruta version of one" The repeated use of one word punctual statements, like right after that " Limitations. Right. " I think the most damning one is when it interrupts the middle of a dialogue to put in a few emoting lines: ""Where-" he stopped. Swallowed. Tried again. "How long was I out" All of these examples were very unnecessary. It's clearly AI and sorry if my first assumption isn't that your writing style somehow matches the texts they produce exactly. Now that I've answered I have a question for you. Why even do this? Do you make money off of it? Or do you get some sort of validation from giving a machine prompts and pasting the results? I've never been able to understand this behavior.

Hope he doesn’t do that dumb shit of changing his author name to write more novels after this so he can rub it in the editors face

That's not the problem here the problem is Yachiru is literally Zaraki's zanpakuto spirit why would she be in the division before him

I don't really see the word padding the other review is talking about. The story is quite grounded and detailed for what I'm assuming is a chinese fic. Good potential

He could’ve just left with his mother if that’s all he cared about?