Ashton_Talmagr

What world is this...

Very Biblical mindset here. she wins major points with me.

Ava surprises me.... I figured she would jump at the chance...

Not gonna lie I love this concept. Dirtclaw is a real one he's been one of my favorite side character for a long time.

I hope these pulled are trained for riders... a cavalry charge isn't just find a mount and chsrge... the animals have to go through extensive desensitization training to be remotely useful in a charge situation...

Ahh... nvm my earlier statement. he's trying to push his son to Arch Lord. smart

That doesn't make sense... the whole reason civvies are willing to worship others is the implicate knowledge thag their faith is what powers their protectors sl even though they aren't elevated in status. Or powerful the ppl they worship are and are then obligated to protect them in turn to guarantee their faith enerygy... i mean at this point orion will jump straight to stage 2 off the humans alone...

Why is Kronos getting the obviously better end of this deal? Why would Lilith actively shackle her own son to the lesser of the two princesses. I get that the Horde is a land based nation so the elf nation is more desirable, plus with Orion marrying Seraphina. they can't take the drakes territory as they serve her... but still it seems odd. Also I just genuinely dont see the benefit fkr the Horde marrying down to the elves or even the drskes... Kronos and Pallas are guaranteed Demis. these princesses will hit legendary. likely but at best Arch Lord... why isn't Orion pursuing relations with his brothers descendents? like Ledonidas or Kraken or even Edward?

I feel bad for his current dragon... thats his day one and he just shits on it

I love your story man but I am mad confused right now.. Last chapter he was talking to people we've never met and now they're back in the forest?