JesTanis

yes, humans are pathetic as usual

I believe I have now managed to properly translate up to chapter 4. If you could give me some feedback on whether it’s actually better, I’d be really grateful.[img=Loving it]

I'll try to fix it ✨🫂❤️‍🩹

for what reason? Is the translation bad? :c

I had the same feeling as you and decided to write my own story! It seems like we have a good point in common. And you know what? Many things may sound generic, but what really matters is what we do with these elements, and I say that you have done a good job!

thanks!

Hello, author here! I developed this story thinking about our own stories. Stories of daily struggle and overcoming where self-knowledge is so important these days. Just like our lives, our love doesn't fall from the sky and isn't so obvious to our eyes. The initial focus of the plot is not this, but I guarantee that just like it happens with each one of us, we will have struggles, victories and defeats and disappointments... It's basically: What if... suddenly magic came to our world? I imagine it could be like that (with a lot of exaggeration in the script, of course haha). I hope you like it, sincerely, I wrote it from the bottom of my heart and I appreciate a story with strong emotional depth. Take care <3

I'm liking what I've seen. Great work, keep it up and I'll try to follow everything! Thank you very much for the chapters. The fact that he's a god killer makes everything much more interesting. Now I just have to find out what kind of gods these are.