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I swear to god the characters' eyes are uncanny AF, the human characters all look like that one stupid looking fish. the worldbuilding is all over the place and the characters talk as if they are robots explaining stuff with every sentence. the only thing this story does good is the MC and the animal fellas. And at times istg MC chooses a stupid choice and it makes me mad icl. I think if the author kept the humans on mute and had MC as the only unmute guy in the world, it would be much more enjoyable, cuz earthing that is spat out of the dumb characters are just as dumb as them.