OneTrueSage

What's Lackluster? Because he is a normal Person not a Psychopath?

Okay, no idea what you are talking about? I use AI just to edit my Stories. It's literally a small time-skip. He got out close to New York, and starts a break planning to travel around the World. Which takes half a year like written in the Chapter, until he ends up in Miami because he wants to experience some College partying. You give me 2 and half stars for two Chapters of an entire story. Should I have just writen a single sentence and skipped a natural progression?

Yeah, I read that too. That's where I got my Inspiration from, or rather how frustating some parts of it are. That's the reason, I made my Ability a leveling one, so I can upgrade it to my needs. His Gate already can return to any World he likes, there is no long changing list like in the average omniversal travel enjoyer. He just needs to think of a specific World, time and place and he can get there. Even AU ones. Just the Cooldown is a thing for now. I have several plans how to upgrade his Abilities as he progresses.

Yeah, I have to admit, I don't quite understand your review either. [ Spoiler Warning ] "MC is lame as hell." A: He is a normal guy who grew up in a normal society and suddenly gained the power to travel across the Multiverse. There were only five chapters available when you wrote your review. What is he supposed to do at that point to not be considered lame by your standards? Suddenly pull out the badass superspy martial arts skills that you surely have compared to us normal folks? "What stops them from just not giving him what he wants..." A: Mrs. Curtis is an alchemist. Equivalent Exchange is a fundamental principle of FMA, and it is also an important law she believes in. Scar is only interested in revenge for his people, with his targets being State Alchemists and the military. He has no interest in civilians, especially when they are exchanging valuable information about the truth behind why his people suffered a genocide. "...or killing him for knowing too much?" He revealed himself to the good guys: human beings living in a society who are also civilians. I don't know how you grew up, but killing is not a normal answer to pretty much anything. It sounds to me like you have never read Fullmetal Alchemist. I can only recommend it. It is considered one of the best stories of all time for a reason. I am honestly disappointed in your review, especially since it is factually wrong. I don't know if you had a bad day or something, but writers put a lot of effort into their work. If you want to be fair, I think you should delete it. I hope you enjoy the story going forward. Have a nice day!

Hello there! It's me with a obligatory Author Review! Of course I am not biased and completely objective! Yes, I am still alive it seems. Somewhat. Had some health Problems, but fortunately recovered from that. A new Story by me too! Hope you enjoy it. Release Schedule is 5 to 6 Chapter a week. I have about the first hundred Chapter planned out. This will be a longterm Project. Enjoy the Story everyone.