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At first, I honestly didn’t really understand the story and felt a bit confused while reading the early chapters. But the more I continued, the more everything slowly started to make sense, and that made the experience even more interesting. The plot has a unique atmosphere and keeps pulling you deeper into the story. Some words and sentences felt a little broken or difficult to understand at times, but overall the story still managed to keep my attention.
Vance be like :
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I don't dislike it, but I lose the sense of reading if it's cut like this many text
I don't know if the sentences in the novel are like this, but to be honest, many sentences are cut and stepped.
Thanks a lot for reading this far. Yes, the story is a slow burn at the beginning because I want to build the world and the MC properly first. And don’t worry, I also dislike dumb MCs 😂 I’ll try my best to keep him consistent. Really appreciate your support!
The pacing keeps readers hooked, especially with the psychological tension and gradual character development. Instead of a typical redemption arc, it feels more like a descent that somehow leads to power and clarity. If you enjoy stories where the line between good and evil is blurred, this one is definitely worth reading.
A fun take on the “extra becomes overpowered” trope. The progression feels satisfying, and the system is easy to follow. It can be a bit cliché and fast-paced at times, but overall it’s an enjoyable, light read that keeps you hooked.
Hi, thank you so much for reading my story and for your kind words, I really appreciate it! Yes, feel free to share the story with your friends, that means a lot to me. As for a comic version, I don’t have one yet at the moment, but it’s something I might consider in the future. Thank you as well for offering your services. I’ll definitely keep it in mind and check out your work when I have the chance. Thanks again for your support!
The beginning feels decent to me, but it definitely hooked my interest. The early part of the story is also really heartbreaking—it hits quite deeply right from the start. Please give this book a try, it’s worth it. Keep going, author