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Your idea about “The Red Lion of Westeros” is very interesting. Anyone who has spent even a little time in the world of A Song of Ice and Fire has heard “The Rains of Castamere” and imagined what lies behind that story — what happened and why. But your interpretation really worked for me. The idea that someone from House Reyne actually survived, and instead of being completely erased, the house continues through exile, feels very convincing. Even more compelling is the choice that this path doesn’t lead him randomly, but specifically to the North — to House Manderly. As far as I remember, House Manderly itself was once exiled from the Reach by House Peake, losing its lands (including Dustonbury, if I’m not mistaken), and had to rebuild its fate in the North. That’s why it makes perfect sense that they would take in the last Reyne — they are a house that understands loss and exile. From there, Henry Reyne’s story becomes even more interesting. He doesn’t just survive — he gains allies, support, and begins forming a core of loyal followers around him. This is not just a political move: he defeats one of the Drumm characters in your story and takes the Valyrian steel sword “Red Rain.” That already serves as a clear symbol of status and legitimacy. The strongest part is that the last Reyne is not raised as a spoiled heir, but as a man of the North — almost an exile who learns to value loyalty, family, and trust. And at the same time, he builds his following not through fear, but through respect. The Valyrian steel sword is especially important. In Westeros, such a blade is not just a weapon, but a political symbol. So a young Reyne wielding one already signals ambition and seriousness. All of this stands in direct contrast to Tywin Lannister. As we know, he used “The Rains of Castamere” as a tool of intimidation — a statement of absolute power: “this is what happens to those who oppose me.” But if the Reynes truly survived, even through a single individual, then that legend already has a crack in it. And if Henry continues to grow in strength, that legend may eventually collapse entirely. Especially considering that he is involved in the Greyjoy Rebellion and may even be in King Robert’s favor. Even his claim to Castamere becomes an interesting question, though the castle itself is basically ruined and would need heavy restoration. However, I doubt Tywin Lannister would allow such a living reminder of his past to exist freely in the West. To him, this is not just a surviving enemy — it is a living unresolved piece of history. I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this story and hope you will continue it.
Your idea about “The Red Lion of Westeros” is very interesting. Anyone who has spent even a little time in the world of A Song of Ice and Fire has heard “The Rains of Castamere” and imagined what lies behind that story — what happened and why. But your interpretation really worked for me. The idea that someone from House Reyne actually survived, and instead of being completely erased, the house continues through exile, feels very convincing. Even more compelling is the choice that this path doesn’t lead him randomly, but specifically to the North — to House Manderly. As far as I remember, House Manderly itself was once exiled from the Reach by House Peake, losing its lands (including Dustonbury, if I’m not mistaken), and had to rebuild its fate in the North. That’s why it makes perfect sense that they would take in the last Reyne — they are a house that understands loss and exile. From there, Henry Reyne’s story becomes even more interesting. He doesn’t just survive — he gains allies, support, and begins forming a core of loyal followers around him. This is not just a political move: he defeats one of the Drumm characters in your story and takes the Valyrian steel sword “Red Rain.” That already serves as a clear symbol of status and legitimacy. The strongest part is that the last Reyne is not raised as a spoiled heir, but as a man of the North — almost an exile who learns to value loyalty, family, and trust. And at the same time, he builds his following not through fear, but through respect. The Valyrian steel sword is especially important. In Westeros, such a blade is not just a weapon, but a political symbol. So a young Reyne wielding one already signals ambition and seriousness. All of this stands in direct contrast to Tywin Lannister. As we know, he used “The Rains of Castamere” as a tool of intimidation — a statement of absolute power: “this is what happens to those who oppose me.” But if the Reynes truly survived, even through a single individual, then that legend already has a crack in it. And if Henry continues to grow in strength, that legend may eventually collapse entirely. Especially considering that he is involved in the Greyjoy Rebellion and may even be in King Robert’s favor. Even his claim to Castamere becomes an interesting question, though the castle itself is basically ruined and would need heavy restoration. However, I doubt Tywin Lannister would allow such a living reminder of his past to exist freely in the West. To him, this is not just a surviving enemy — it is a living unresolved piece of history. I am very much looking forward to the continuation of this story and hope you will continue it.
The beginning is very intriguing, and I genuinely liked the core idea, but the writing itself feels a little weak in places, if you understand what I mean. Old Nan doesn’t really sound like someone telling a legend — instead, it feels as if she’s reading them some kind of historical or semi-mythical chronicle. In my opinion, that’s a small flaw on your part. Still, the premise is very interesting, and I’m looking forward to the continuation and to seeing you further develop this story. I also noticed another story on your channel called “Big Billions.” I added it to my list as well, and I hope you’ll eventually start writing that one too.
Will this be continued? I’m really curious.
Dear Author, I really enjoyed your work and must say: you have come close to the point where even Martin himself might have praised you. I was especially struck by the contrast between the characters of Joffrey and Stefan Baratheon in your story. It reminds me of Balerion the Broken Spear and Maekar Targaryen as brothers — different from their own, but with a slight distinction. It all depends on the fact that Stefan is younger, while Balerion was the elder, but that does not change the essence. Essentially, both are geniuses — geniuses within a certain circle, and in a certain sense, ideals who might have been able to make the kingdom better. You depict this contrast very well, as well as the fraternal feelings, including Joffrey's envy, since the entire Baratheon family — or rather, more the Lannisters than the Baratheons — adores Stefan. Robert Baratheon, as you mentioned, gave him attention a few times. He is loved by Jaime Lannister, Sercey Lannister dotes on him, and Tyrion Lannister respects him. Naturally, Tommen and Myrcella Baratheon adore him as well, since you wrote that he played with them and read them bedtime stories. Even Tywin Lannister, who can be considered an architect of kingdoms and the materializer of Gdajdey from Costomer in every sense, seems to have received the perfect heir not only for Costomer but for the entire kingdom. This aspect and parallel are very similar to Balerion the Broken Spear: his knighthood, honor, strength, and resolve. At first, Stefan seemed somewhat clumsy, but that was quickly compensated. You made him thoughtful, decisive, and determined, which perfectly highlights the contrast. I greatly admire that. It is precisely in this contrast that Joffrey's envy of his brother emerges, especially since Stefan is younger — and Joffrey constantly notices: “Stefan this, Stefan that,” with the whole family focused on him. Here, one line fits perfectly. I mostly watched the series The Knight of the Seven Kingdoms, and I was struck by a line from Leonel Baratheon, also known as the Laughing Whirlwind. He said to Balerion: “Perhaps your mother loved you more. For those who do not receive love fight with greater determination and desperation” — or something along those lines. Here we see an interesting parallel: Balerion the Broken Spear was perfect in his time, just as you portray Stefan. Joffrey, in turn, plays the role of Maekar. The only difference is that Maekar was younger, while Joffrey is older, but that is offset by what he does. Finally, what nickname would you give Balerion? For example, he seems like a prototype of Rhaenyra Targaryen from House of the Dragon, or, as she is also called, the Queen Who Never Was. I would almost give Balerion the same title, more precisely: “the king who will never come” or “the king who will never be.”
Your idea is quite interesting. Will there be a continuation?
Do you think I'd fear the "greatest dragons"? I've seen many. But Teraxis isn't like that. Not huge like Vhagar. Not furious like Caraxes. Not savage like Cannibal. Not dazzling like Sunfyre. Not youthful like Vermax. He understands me. He was with me from the first moments, wrapped his wings around me, warmed me, and fell asleep beside me. We are one. His mind is sharp, his heart sees me. Neither armies nor other dragons frighten us. We are more than rider and dragon. We are invincible because we are connected.
Я, кажется, начинаю немного понимать, в смысле, а вот этот персонаж, как Кайн, это больше оригинальный персонаж, больше к вашей задумке, или нет? А всё другое, да. Например, героиня Блонди Блейзер, это вы взяли из этой видеоигры Dispatch, АЛУкарда и Серас Викторию вы взяли из Хелсинга, Азазеля и Концепт Арта из мира DXD, И, разумеется, вампиров вы взяли из видеоигры VAMPIRE THE MASQUERADE BLOODLINES 2.
Tell me, will there soon be a meeting with someone from Game of Thrones or House of Dragons?
Tell me, will there be a meeting with someone from the world of Game of Thrones soon?