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nah you got a point they got the same name , same butler , cloak bruh wth
how long do you plan on making the dream realm arc ?
will the main cast be introduced
very i mean very unlikely
they arent helping him go to the city he is simply accompanying them to the city
i took your advice and decided to slow down the time line a bit and add a bit of character interaction
with the mc not encountering anyone is that i am kinda afraid of writing character interactions and getting the personality of the character wrong
thats one of my main problems with pacing of my story but the other factor was that i every ss fic i have read is stuck on the forgotten shore and i wanted to do something different
thanks but idk if its that good for you to do so :[
as the author i can say i pretty new to writing and am just writing this to improve my abilities so feedback is greatly appreciated _________________________________________________________________