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if you seek opinion then I must tell you the reason you're having problem for plot is because you are more focused on sexual content but if you balance it with adventures and battles and more world building then you'll have more to write
bro hear me out don't end here this novel has immense potential in netori category and Mc has a lot of potential to grow. you're a fine writer why dont you seek some inspiration from other novels maybe it will help to plan future plot.
yeah it has good power system and good world building just that excessive simpping made me drop it.
well there are many gender bender novels and I have read some this is by far seems most interesting to me, good concept keep it up.
bro what happen why aren't you posting?? it's been almost a month ?
then I wish you good luck
nothing wrong bro just sick of beta and simp mc's so gave a friendly advice
why updates are too few and slow ???????
he was male now female, that is why he dont accept male love also he don't accept female for some reason and MC even mentioned many times in novel that he isn't even interested in girls! why? if it is then why he isn't trying to revert back to being male but as expected author is female and she wants a female is that it ?
bro can you make him a little less simp. I mean he is like everything I do for sake my wife's bla bla bla, he can't criticize them no matter what they do, it's like his very being revolves around some women, if not for his boons those women aren't even worthy of being alive till now ,it's irritating when some unknown women who he woo for some time becomes so important for him that he can die for them.