Fennecawb1

Absolutely brilliant! I've been looking for a story like this for a while. I'm only about 40 chapters in, and I'm really enjoying it so far. Please don't drop it! 😔🙏 Also, a small request—maybe add a bit of romance? I get that you’re going for a serious fanfic vibe, and that's great, but 40 chapters in, and the MC hasn't even shown interest in any girls. You haven't even mentioned any female characters so far. Does the Sand Village have no women at all? 😂 Of course, it’s your story, and you’re doing an amazing job, but a little romance would make it perfect. Keep up the great work!

Amazing story! Going to give this 5 stars because I'll definitely be reading it again! And I'll be on the lookout for new chapters that are hopefully coming in the future! :D

story is quite impressive and different but some subplots are quite cliche but it is interesting to read and entertaining let's see how it develops in the future

A fun novel to waste time. The author's style is constantly improving. Perhaps my only problem is that there is some filler in the middle chapters, but the author may have realized his mistake and become better than it was.

It's a nice book, but the author should post many chapters at once. I'm thinking of dropping it soon if it continues this slow anyway i say its good

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